Saturday, April 24, 2010

deep: NaPoWriMo #24



we are sinking sinking sinking and no one knows to where,
while they talk of treasure in pirates ships deep below the golden waters--
i'll wear my tutu to be safe.

2 comments:

  1. Mmm I quite like this. The idea of everybody sinking, yet there is talk of treasure below.

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  2. Erin-- you make it sound so much more deep and philosophical than my midnight ramblings! Haha, i'll be curious to see what editing does to these napowrimo poems (:

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